Can you help me understand this Management question?
The methods section needs significant development. Also I am again telling you that you need to NOT DO human subject research (no questioniers no surveys). You do not have IRB approval, I have not seen you turn in an application, your survey’s are not developed, validated, and approved. They are not attached. You do not adequately describe the method. Also you can do this by gathering data already in existence from sources. You need to find those sources, name them, then expand you literature review for reading to support. I will tell you right now, you do not have enough sources listed to complete or support your research. Also the proposal is written in future tense and that is wrong. Attached is a copy of the fixes that need to be made. Also is attached is an example properly formatted proposal please follow that for proper formatting and page layout. So preformed all fixes I put in the pdf file and follow formatting and paper layout according to template.